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a single rose.

All that is to be said, about us.

Singing to my soul, which is
Intertwined with yours.
Never looking back to all the awful things.
Giving all your love to me, your soul, your heart, your ring.
Living with the day to day,
Easier than ever

Round and round the world we go,
Only to end never.
Soon i'll be yours,
Eternally yours.

Author notes

not my best, but still okay...
Written December 12th, 2005

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  • Red Death
    January 24, 2006
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    Bravo!

    This is a very well done acrostic poem, very beautiful.Seriouly if this is not your best like you say, I'm going to have to read your other poems! It flows very well and it's so emotional and full of love, keep up the good work!


  • Ghost of a Siren
    January 8, 2006
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    Very beautiful, you're very talented.


  • M.A.King
    December 13, 2005
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    More than 'ok'! Acrostics are difficult for me and so I admire them when they are done well. You have a wonderful content and have made it flow with the form nicely. Thank you for this entry.