Pitch Black nights
To match my heart
My soul is lost
I cut myself
To feel your pain
I'm to numb
To care about you
I rap the rope
Around my neck
So i know what it feels like
Not to breath
I sit in silence
As you cry
My heart becomes more black
As silence drifts across the room
As I cut myself
To feel like you.
Author notes
Yeah I got bored
I guess it is kinda about how you can tell me all your problems but I'll never know how you truly feel just like you wont know how I feel.
Written December 12th, 2005
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Nice write, a few grammatical errors but other wise it was awesome, you express yourself very well and the flow was great.
~Tina -
This is really good Asia. I love the flow in this and everything. The last 2 lines were my favorite.
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This is a really good poem. I love the picture, it's so awesome. I like the poem as well. Keep writing.
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Wow Asia, I love your style. Its very different, and very enjoyable. Deliciously sad. -
it was awesome
this is really good and god damnit it doesnt sux eeeeeeer your so annoying lol this was really awesome luv you lots ~Lissa~ -
SRY IF IT SUXS !!!!
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