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It Whistled Through The Hole In My Head:

"I am narcotic, revenge,
I am anticlimatic and complete;
hush-hush shoes on an antiseptic floor,
White

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Melanoma, misinformer, tell me something new.
Written December 12th, 2005

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  • Kryer
    December 12, 2005
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    I like this a lot. Especially the ending. It's short but it has a lot of meaning. It makes me feel something I can't describe. Excellent.