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Give Me The Gold...

Because it's ME!

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Written December 12th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • DamnUnique
    December 15, 2005
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    LOL...thanks for the comment and the applause.


  • zain
    December 15, 2005
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    lolz good one ahh the contest holder is still judging.....so good luck
    Zin
    Edited on Dec 15, 3:07 because ''.


  • DamnUnique
    December 13, 2005
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    Aha...I just checked it out. "Yummy" poem.


  • leander Moderators member
    December 13, 2005
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    (I entered her in this contest too) somewhere down the list

  • DamnUnique
    December 13, 2005
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    Ostrich? How cool! I've never seen an ostrich but I really find them cool animals...somewhat dumb but nonetheless, cool.


  • leander Moderators member
    December 13, 2005
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    I have an ostrich as pet you know they can bite quite nasty too

  • DamnUnique
    December 13, 2005
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    LOL...yeah, the fork does sting nasty when I don't get my way. So, everyone should watch out!
    Thanks for the comment.

  • leander Moderators member
    December 13, 2005
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    awe this is quite the cute devil but I guess that fork can sting quite nasty if you don't get your way best of luck!


  • DamnUnique
    December 13, 2005
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    Lol...thanks for the comment, Kayla.

  • DamnUnique
    December 13, 2005
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    I'm cute! I'm CUTE! I'm CUUUUTE! I AM CUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE! I AM CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE!!!!!!!
    Haha...thanks for the comment, Vic. Yes, I will keep on writing and will soon post a normal poem here.

  • DamnUnique
    December 13, 2005
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    Thanks for the applause and for the smiley.


  • DamnUnique
    December 13, 2005
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    Thanks for the comment and the applause, Mina.


  • DamnUnique
    December 13, 2005
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    Lol...thanks for the comment. It all depends on the contest holder now.

  • DamnUnique
    December 13, 2005
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    Hahaha.....that devil is me. And I don't eat my own sneakers.
    Thanks a lot for the lovely comment and the applause.


  • eternalpoet
    December 13, 2005
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    4 Stars ****

    : laughs around this page and jumps on your head : ... i still cant get it why hopelessly Hopeful said its CUTE ... ( how in this hell can YOU be cute ?? or your works jk ) .. look and listen there somewhere inside you a poet is still alive...keep on writing.. and i will be write here to kick you

    nice write.. good work.. thanks for sharing sweets

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend... just keep it up .... your humble little friend.... .... ..... ....... - vic ( who else? )

  • i luv cupcakes
    December 12, 2005
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    Awwww that's cute!
    ♥Kayla

  • Ankeeta silver member
    December 12, 2005
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  • mina nagi
    December 12, 2005
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    Hahahahahahaha... This is ever so funny... This has made my belly laugh... I sincerely wish you should get Gold... Good luck...
    mina


  • Kwame
    December 12, 2005
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    wow!!!it's just too adorable...because it's me....now that outta get you gold....great one...great to know you ain't down and out...


  • sunny day
    December 12, 2005
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    This is Awesome, LMAO!!!!!

    Navdeep, OMG, I'm LMAO!!!!!!! This is hilarious, you are a little devil. Great thought here and I love the background. The devil even has green sneakers, are you going to eat them? Hahahaha!!!!! Best wishes with this in the contest. I've been reading some really funny ones and my cheeks are killing me from laughing so much. The other ones from sitting too long. Gotta get up and move around now. Not before I leave you with a standing ovation and a big round of applause. Love and blessings for you my friend, today and always. Joyce

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