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Suits me fine



The falling rain hurtles towards the window pane
Each tear shaped drop shatters as it hits cold glass
One after the other, creating a rhythmic drumming
Which follows the beat of my heart

Just another fool, played like a game
Beaten again by the dealer
Given out only to be brought back and replaced
By a better, newer version

A broken victim, a doll no longer cared for
Forgotten and left to age ungracefully
Gather dust in a dingy corner, and when found
Thrown away like yesterdays newspaper

I'm just another sufferer of a thing we call a broken heart
But everyday I'm learning how to overcome you
Show you that i don't hurt anymore and i no longer care
I don't need or want you anymore

And that suits me fine

 

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Written December 12th, 2005

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  • crystaltips
    December 13, 2005
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    thanks i really appreciate it... hehe fabby (i like that word )
    Lauren xxx

  • crystaltips
    December 13, 2005
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    Lol i have been alot angrier in previous writes. Thankyou for the comment i really do appreciate it
    Lauren xxx


  • spot the pink
    December 13, 2005
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    awesome!!!really nice images, and i dont normally notice this, but really nice rythm too!!!super fabby


  • got my love back
    December 12, 2005
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    great write

    wow great write
    i can tell this came from an angry version of you
    he must have hurt you bad
    i hope you keep getting over him so you aren't hurting anymore
    keep up the good writing