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Now it's time for me to leave



No words can describe how hurts I am
Because of you, I gave up my family
Because of you, I gave up my friends
Because of you, I don't care what other think
Now you say you don't remember all that
Now you say I give all these things up willingly
Now you say I want any man, as long as they pay attention to me
Peoples say I should give up on you
Peoples say you are hopeless
Peoples say all that and much more
I know what I can handle
I give myself a time limit
When that time is limit up, I will leave
Leave to the world you would where never find me

As we have more argument
My heart is starting to die on  you
My heart broke into thousands of piece
Now my time is up
Why are you still not changing?
I don't want to leave this world, feeling sad
I ask you again
Will you, can you please pay more attention to me than drugs and gambling?
You give me that look
I know that look, you must think what is up with me tonight
Am I getting crazy?
Then I smiled and said I just tried and need some rest that all
You hurry me to the bed
Saying I bring bad luck to you
Hope and Sadness over whelm me
I have no family, no friends
The love of my life, love gamble and drugs more than me
What can I say, I such a fool
Now it's time for me to leave.
Farewell my love, take care.



 

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Written December 12th, 2005

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  • January 27, 2006
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    I like this poem very much. It touched my heart many times and it still does. I love the poem and the meaning of it as well

  • popsicle007
    January 21, 2006
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    wow this poem has really touched me! it has deep meanings about relationship troubles. maybe you should talk to your partner. good luck and well written!


  • Unintended Embrace
    December 13, 2005
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    I like this poem very much so. It seems in relationships that one person is always giving and the other is always taking. Keep up the awesome work.


  • dreamer wind
    December 13, 2005
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    thank you so much you guy for reading this poem, it really meant a lot to me


  • December 12, 2005
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    I love how you put you words and Bravo Dreamer. I'm speechless on that one expect you did it again. I love it.
    Much love J.


  • MorningWinds
    December 12, 2005
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    Obviously,alot of people can relate to this.Sometimes you don't know or care about anything except the person you think is your love.You did a great job on this


  • mypassion
    December 12, 2005
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    A touching poem, written from the heart. You did a good job on expressing true feelings, and I think questions of the heart that all have questioned before. Great job. Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering. Much and respect Brenda

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