Like kindred spirits
Separate,
So different
Yet together,
The same
Binding and bonding
Melding as one
Becoming a whole
Sharing a kiss
At break of day
Once again
At fall of night
Upon spiritual plains
They unite
Entwining within
One another arms
As the colors
Of sky transcend
From day to night
And night to day
Hand in hand
Side by side
They go together
In the most perfect way
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Author notes
The song is called Waterfall by Enya.
Written December 12th, 2005
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Thank you for your kind words.
I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. It has become one of my favorites
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This is beautifully done. Reaches the spirit and takes hold. Lovely job here
Gypsy
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I thank you much for your kind words.
They are very much appreciated
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The flow of this went so well and the reading was beautiful. Your voice added some extra flair and pizzazz along the way allowing the listener to drift along with your words. Great job! Thank you for entering our contest and good luck.
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Thank you once again for your kind words.
I'm pleased you enjoyed this piece
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Beautifully read. I've used that same music in a multi-media presentation I did of one of my poems.
Good choice! I liked the way your poem flowed, especially that little rhyme at the end. Good touch!
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Once again thank you for taking the time to comment with such lovely words.
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I never would have imagined how natural this sounded. You read this stuff so well! I don't have very many points left... If the poems are this good all the way down the list, I don't know how I'm going to keep giving applause! This was truly beautiful.
P.S. It was choppy for me when it was still loading, so I turned down the volume, let it load, and then played it back again when it was finished. I'm guessing the file size must be large...
Mike -
This is a beautiful poem. The audio wouldn't work right for me. Just small snippets. Checking you other and minePeace, Rob
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Awww Paul, ya just too kind.
Maybe it's a good thing I didn't got with the erotic piece I was contiplating....LOL
Glad you liked it hun and thank you for your most kind words.
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Mix of Southern and New England accent might get worse if I move to AZ like I am hoping and planning......LOL
My so called accent will become a scrambled mess...
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very sexy I was sooooo impresed I hads to listen a couple of times I'd get lost in your voice and forget to listen to the poem all the best with this
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Very nice for your first try, Bel... you've already surpassed me! and I luv your 'togethahh' with that unique mix of Southern and New England accent! lol You do have a very good voice for reading...
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Thank you much. I just figured I'd give it a try. Hardest part was finding music that I felt fit the piece, But I think it fit pretty well together overall.
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Oh, this is beautifully done. Congratulations. Dump.com has a bit of threading problems, but it worked well in spite of it!
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I love Enya and I love LOTR........enough said!!!
And thank you much for your comment
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You like enya too? Do you like lotr? That one song she did for that movie was sooo pretty. I thought I recognized that song. That poem was AWESOME by the way!! ^_^
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