When he looked my way
I wanted him to see
See that i wanted him
And that i needed him
His looks could stop you in your tracks
His eyes could look straight into your soul
His voice could make you shiver
His touch could set you free
When he looked my way
I thought he was looking at someone else
But he was looking into my soul
And seeing the real me
How could one boy do all of this?
How could one boy make me feel this way?
How could one boy make me stop and think?
How could one boy make me love him?
Is this for real?
That i could love him so?
But would he want me?
Want me to be his?
Is this the way i really feel?
Is this the way i want it to be?
Is this the way i will turn out?
Is this the way i could be forever?
He walked over to me
But it seemed like he floated
He was an angel and was untouchable
But why did he want to speak to me
"I want you to be mine"
"I want you in my life"
"I want you to love and hold"
"I want you to be with me forever"
I wanted to say all of the above
But was too scared to utter a single word
I just sat there like an idiot
And smiled at him like a fool
He sat next to me and gave me a hug
He sat next to me and held my hand
He sat next to me and kissed me sweetly
He sat next to me and said he loved me
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Written December 12th, 2005
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very nice indeed
Yes I still say it. You have a lot of poetic talent. You stanzas are stand alone. They tell a story each of them. They flow and are easy to read. A lovely story in this one. You are a romantic for sure.
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Lovely romantic poem
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This is a very lovely and romantic write that is full of beautiful imagery. Your writing really expressed very well how you feel about this person and the short lines gave this a nice flow. You write very well. Take care and Have fun. Steve
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ewww...sorry.. Sick of love poetry.. This doesn't stand out to me .. one thing could be improved would be a better word choice. I don't know maybe it is just my mood right now, I don't fell all warm and fuzzy..
you captured the warm and fuziness of love though.. so umm good job for that.. -
Very beautiful romantic emotions in this write Such innocent love and devotion thats a beautiful feeling. I hope that you will have those feelings for the rest of your life Very well done Herman
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This is a most powerful, emotional, yet 'warm and fuzzy', 'floating on a cloud' write There is NOTHING like that dreamy feeling of falling in love, having that man come and hold your hand and planting a sweet smackeroo on those burning lips
But most of all, when he looks in your eyes and tells you that he loves you 
You've done a most eloquent job of creating such beautiful imagery with this piece.
Young love....hmmmmmm
Old love, too 
It's ALL wonderful! Many blessings and 
s. Good luck with your man, Hon! Happy Holidays
~ Becky ~
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This poem is absolutely gorgeous... why? because my friend I know what this feels like. Love is an emotion that is beautiful and feeling all those things with a simple touch, look or words is an amazing thing. I loved when you said that when he looked at you he looked straight into your soul... that was a beautiful line. My friend keep on loving... and never stop feeling this way. Thank you for sharing with me this beautiful love poem, it surely made my day and also for the wonderful gift of your loving pen. Blessed be, Nena♥
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Oh wow, Im not saying this to suck up but this was really powerful, I could feel your emotions in this, I could feel how much you cared about this person, i could feel the love, the passion, the fear of him not liking you, he sounds like my bf so prefect, so nice, it flowed really well i liked the picture you painted with words here, well done on a great poem, I have run out of free applauds today but this deserves one so I am going to applaud you anyway. xxx QueenTooo
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