Swimming in this deep, deep ocean
Trying to keep my mind of you
But no matter how hard I try
The memories just keep coming back
The happy times and the sad time
As the memories flash in my head
I swim deeper and deeper
You always told me if I love you, I have to trust you
I try, I really try, I try my hardest
No matter what rumor say about you and her I try my best to ignore it
Until on day you send me this invitation about you and her wedding
You say we are over
You say that you have found the "one"
What about me?
Why'd you come to me then?
Why are you toying with my feeling?
You said if I truly love you, I should be happy for you because found your true love
Yes, as a friend I'm happy for you
But as a lover I hate you
I hate you toying with my feeling like that
But I say nothing of that kind to hurt you
With a smile I said congratulation, for finding your true love and please don't come here again
Please, when you see at the street, pretend you don't know me
Then you eyes filled with relief
It feels like someone has stabbed me for hundreds of time
You didn't say anything, but I can see it in your eye
You thought I would ask for more
You thought I would cry and beg you to stay
I will not do such things
I love you more than life itself
I would never do anything to hurt you
I would never include myself to hurt you
Swim deeper and deeper in the ocean
I know my time finally here
Goodbye my love, Goodbye
Author notes
2.) Write a poem about a heartbreak... Write how your heart was broken and why... how does it feel to have your heartbroken... Make me cry... I want to feel your pain and heartache...
Written December 11th, 2005
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I exactly know what you mean, I've felt the same feelings.
I really Like this poem, you've really put your feelings in it, I felt it.
Swimming in this deep, deep ocean
Trying to keep my mind of you
But no matter how hard I try
The memories just keep coming back
The happy times and the sad time
As the memories flash in my head
I swim deeper and deeper
You always told me if I love you, I have to trust you
wonderfull words do you use, this piece of your poem is really strong.
beautiful poem!! good luck
keep going.
byee -
I am really sorry about your heart break and I hope that you also find your true love. Thanks for entering my contest.
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Love and hate - they are surely the same face of a coin. A good poem. Good luck in the contest. Spill ink and twist me into the shape of love...
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thank you
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This poem was very emotional... I could feel your heartache and pain in this poem... it was very well writen... good luck in my contest... -
How sad, to love some-one so much to let them go and to put an end to your life! i truly hope this was not about you, you are worthy of love and you will be shown true love one day. Just be patient. Well done.
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i liked this and felt the emotion but the spelling ruined it, as i had to stop reading to figure out the word, but good emotion thankyou for entering
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this is reall good!i was full of emotion! you did a really good job! i liked it! thanks for entering. good luck.
keep up the good work
thanks again
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This is really good. There's a few typos in here..but the emotion is very powerful. Very interesting, and different. Thanks for entering, and good luck.
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If this happen in real life and I know this guy, I will beat the crap out this guy for you. I only hope you real life is nothing like this. Well then I love this poem and I love the way you put it. It so beautiful
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