She only five years old
She suppose to be enjoying her childhood
Not this
Not lying in here
In this surgery room
She don't want to be here
She wants her mommy,
She wants her friends
She wants to be a good girl
She heard lots of people say December is month for miracle
She believed it very deeply
Mommy told her that if she a good girl
Listen to what doctors tell her
Her illness will be gone
She will have a normal childhood
She will have hair
Not wearing her light blue hat all the time
She so happy to hear that
She ask her mommy when will she have her hair
Mommy say nothing, sadness and hurts in her mommy eye, make her never ask that question again.
Mommy told her, this is her last surgery
She has to be brave little girl
First time in her life, she see mommy eyes fill with hopes and happiness
Mommy told her this Christmas she will invited all her friends over to the house
Mommy told her next year, her hair will grown
She can go to school and plays with her friends
When mommy tells her all this thing
She thought she is hearing a fairy tales
Mommy ask her what she wants for Christmas
She say mommy I have all the things I want for Christmas. You know you should never ask Santa Clause for too many presents at one time or you will be on his naughty list.
Mommy cry.
She thought she's in trouble
Mommy hold her and kisses her
Tell her, you will never be on Santa Clause naughty list
Not this year,
Now in this surgery room
She has to be brave
Mommy and Santa Clause presents are waiting for her
Author notes
Written December 11th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Remembering Someone Special by SilverRain.
750 points, ended November 9, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very sad and heart filled poem, I really enjoyed it, I have lost a lot of family to cancer. I hope she gets better God is with you watching over you both! God Bless you! Best of luck to you in the contest!
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wow very moving and sad
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Really sad and good i love this poem i'm gonna hang it on the fridge thanks
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Thank you for the comment. I know this poem itself is christmas poem. But when you say you need poem represent hope for your little sister. That the one i think of. I hope everythings will work out with your little sister. She will be in my prayer tonight. I really wish you and her the best. Dreamer
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this is WONDERFUL. very nice good luck in the conntest
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I knew it you! You deserve the golden cup.
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i liked this poem. a very sad one though, but it gives the girl hope, when she hears about the presents!
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Very touching and loving poem. I don't know the full situation or if this is truly a real story. If it is, I hope that the little girl is doing much better, if she isn't she will be in my prayers. I loved this and you honestly have done a great job. Keep up the great work, God bless.
Kahy.. on note, the grammar was a little rough but I could read it and that is all that matters, but this poem would be better if the grammar was better. Thanks for entering.
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There are millions of children around the world who are sufferin
g from many deadly sickness. and I really wish that this Christ
mas and new year, They come back to warm hearts and arms. love
your work. all the best in the contest. -
Very moving.
This is the kind of great poem that really touches to the core with such wonderful emotion. Great write. -
Very tenderly and beautifully written, my friend! This was so well done! Good luck in the contest! I wish you well!
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great poem. good luck with contest.
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awwww....... It make you feel all sad inside and make me look at christmas differenly now as always LOVE IT. Even thought it just the poem and all, i want to know are this poem real in the real life in your life. anyways Love it
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