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My Angel

Fighting the illusions
Engulfed in the confusions
Regaining myself again
Getting rid of all the sin

With the help of the one i love
Maybe he is an angel from above
He is giving me all i need
And finally, my soul can be freed

Rising higher than before
Maybe i can love once more
If my heart will not be broken
Then in God's word, he has spoken

I was lost with no reprieve
And now i have room to breath
I could only look back, nothing more
And now he has given me a brand new shore

And this angel doth mended
This heart that was torn and rendered
He hath come unto my life
Ending all thy pain and strife

And so I thank this angel truly
Who hath fought away the cruelty
And so helping me to live
And be able to forgive

For my angel, I love the duly
And so i thank thee, I thank thee truly

Author notes

a poem written for my angel, he is the light of my life, i would still be lost, had he not found me and helped me back to being myself
Written December 11th, 2005

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  • November Inc
    September 18, 2006
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    Very deep.. I agree with Cyberlee1. You've managed to capture absolute beauty and love, even when you were at a rather dark moment in life.
    Anyways, hope to see you back on AP sometime soon. Noticed you hadn't been on in a while.

  • Cyberlee1
    December 15, 2005
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    very good

    this is beautiful. may you always see good in the bittersweet moments of life.


  • Jordannn
    December 13, 2005
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    kick ass

    wow Im blown away this is GREAT!! brava!