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Might As Well

 

Perfection is a flawed perception--

Might as well be blind and deaf

To each sunset and compliment,

Numb to each slight of affection.

 

 

God tell me why I can’t see

This is how it’s meant to be...


He holds my hand


   More like holding a gun


He wraps his arms around me

   

Like a noose


He hugs me so tightly


   Crushing me and my heart


And I stand there smiling

   Choking on my tongue.

 

 


Perfection is a flawed perception

Might as well be silent, mute,

Since no words mean anything

To anyone anymore

Life’s gone from roaring to a great depression.

 

 

God tell me why I can’t see

This is how it’s meant to be ...


He gazes into my dry eyes


   While I’m crying inside


He smiles at my smile


   Which is really a grimace


He holds me since I am so cold


   But I’m only growing colder


Saying that there’s so much time

   

While I’m only getting older

 

 


All hope is rotting away

Like a corsage in the days of summer

Of finding someone someday

Who I could call my true lover

I throw it all into the trash

Weep deeply and strike a match

So long sweet sorrow, you were never my friend


Might as well let everything go

Might as well let nobody know

The anguish rules my life ev’ry day

This tortured feeling will not go away

Might as well torch all of my dreams

Life is never as good as it seems

Perfection is a deceptive perception

Goes from roaring to a great depression

I have learned all of life’s lessons

But God why can’t I see

This is how it’s meant to be.

Author notes

Another poem I've been wanting to post on here because of its "different" form
Written September 12th, 2005

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  • flowerfairies
    December 13, 2005
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    this is a good poem with the two sides of the verse it gives it a real different meaning it's very clever how you did it like the good and the bad i liked itxx


  • xBrokenxSmilesx
    December 11, 2005
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    wow....how amazing

    wow what a BEAUTIFUL poem omgosh!! I had to go back and read it twice, thats truly amazing. wow....this is truly incredible. this is one of the best poems i have read in a very long time. Thank you so much for allowing others to read such a beautiful poem. Keep up the wonderful work. Really...im awed. Really! Wow....

    -stephani

  • Katie Jo
    December 11, 2005
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    This poem really rocked..I loved the part about how the world was roaring and now its just a great depression. i loved the empathy in this poem, i hope to check out more of these great things, keep it up!
    --Katie Jo


  • DreameeDarlin2U
    December 11, 2005
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    Great

    I love this!!!! I didn't notice the verses off to the right at first. I went back and put them all together it was excellent! Good Job keep writing