What is there to contemplate about?
Is it why our hearts are made of stone?
Or is it why our love is gone?
Why love?
Why contemplate when we have never loved?
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I'm back!!! er... not exactly.. hehe
Written December 11th, 2005
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I could agree with your sentiments of your question on why we do...for some reason, it just happens or personally, I have penchants for it
that kind of outside looking in
I guess, by writing these thoughts
you're contemplating too
it's inevitable when it ocurr like you're just bound to be... cause it's human nature
but this, you got us all contemplating with it
Welcome back
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why indeed? questions to contemplate on but cannot always find the answers to. they're just things that unravel by themselves. great job. and welcome back! ^ hugs ^
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This is good but I felt like you could have said more. Less is not always more.
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Bravo! You say so much in these few words. Excellent food for thought. It makes me wonder what I stay up thinking about so late into the night, for I have never been in love. Great job, take care, and good luck in all you do!
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Short & simple. easy to read . I like poems like this, get the point across in so little words. good job. best wishes always
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Short but good. Blunt and wonderful. I love the simple emotion. Very nicely written. Great job and keep on writing.
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I like this poem! It is very simple and straight foward. Good Job!
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Wow thats amazing. Its short but we get the point. Its a good poem. Good wording. Keep up the great work.
xoxo
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