Everyday i sit here and wonder why im still here. living in this house still alive to this day. with everything i been threw, everything i seen im suprised i ain't dead. people say they know what i've been threw, they know what i've seen well trust me,you have no idea. i have been abused, i have cut, i have seen my family and friends get killed. i have lived on the streets and trust me it wasn't all its cracked up to be. people say oh my life was worse but trust me havin ya mother come home drunk or druged up having to help her get to bed while she cussin at you. trust me you ain't have it worse.growin up on the streets gettin into trouble all ya life. being in and outta jail. but you know what i've made my life work. i go to a good school. get descent grades and there ain't nothing that can bring me down.
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Written December 11th, 2005
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i liked it it's raw emotion and it was put well into your poetry. good work! -
you are very good at what you are doing i think you should quit your day job and just write wonderful great work keep it up -kevin
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great write and keep it up i want to see u write more ur really good and it could take u some where and im glad also nothing can bring u down
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I'm glad nothing can bring you down. Great poem. I'm sorry you've had a bad life, mine hasn't been to good but I've never lived on the streets, come close. Great write. if you have time please read my newest poem just a dream. thanks.
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