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some day ill make you proud.

On hollow ground I sit and wait

Singing songs about your grave,

I never thought it’d be this way

When are you coming back home

 

When I heard the news

I didn’t know what to think

Daddy said you had fallen to sleep

I know he tried to protect me

 

But now I know the truth

And hurts to be with out you

Some day ill be coming home to you

 

Ive grown up since the day you left

With out you I haven’t done the best

But ive still got a lot of time to grow

One day ill make you happy

Be the best man that I could be

Ill make you proud


Its going to take awhile

But its ok because id love to see you smile

Until that day comes

I hope you know I love you.

Author notes

this one is about the most kind, loving person that ive ever known, my grandmother. she will be missed.
Written December 11th, 2005

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  • December 13, 2005
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    This is such a touching piece. I can tell you poured these emotions straight from your heart. The reader can feel your strong love for your grandmother. Thanks for sharing.

  • itsjustme
    December 12, 2005
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    A great piece, I just hope you aren't going home to her too quickly Thanks for sharing, keep up the excellent work.