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Your soft green eyes...

Soft green eyes,

rosy red cheeks,

smile like an angel ,

the lady in my dreams,

remember that time,

back in October

the first night we met

the moonlit walk we took

I was so shy and you were so beautiful

You made me open up

Like no one ever has

It was cold but I didn’t mind

Your embrace kept me feeling warm inside

You said someday ill be happy

And you were right

You never left my mind since that night

Author notes

this ones simply about the most gorgeous girl in my life.
Written December 11th, 2005

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  • Darker Lyn
    December 11, 2005
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    good

    i like that. its kind of. that once in a life time rondevous. its pretty. great write