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I want out (trapped)

i sit here happy on the outside
in the inside ripped and confused
people only look at the outside
so no one knows how i feel
in the inside
my inside wants to come out
of its flesh that is containing it
so people can see what is
really going on
but my outside takes over
and keeps it shut with
a key
so how do i get my feelings
across people
i don't
i just sit there looking happy
when inside confused and being
tortured by not being able to
get out
Trapped
i sit there happy
everyone thinks I'm happy
but am i?
i cant express myself
I'm locked tightly inside
how do i get out
this key is ruining my life
I WANT OUT

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Written December 11th, 2005

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  • KatHardKore
    December 13, 2005
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    great write. it kinda resembles one of nicholes poems but oh well that doesnt matter. bravo
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