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So faint


Inside a dream I heard your whisper
Tickling my ear with the vibrations of your voice
As eyes awaken slowly the vision of your silhouette
Becomes more visible, becomes more clear
  … More angelic with the focus of my iris…
While thoughts of you flood my head
I dwell on the days ahead
Along with the days that have passed
As times shadow casts upon us each time we part
I wonder if deep inside
You can hear the calling of my heart
I cry out for you
I reach my hand out for yours
    … Hoping that you’ll grab onto mine and never let go
With open arms, I wrap myself inside until they collapse
Your embrace is tight and secure
Lock me up inside the moment forever
    … Hold onto me until you can’t hold on anymore

As our lips connect and bare flesh meet
Perfectly fitting together
    … Interlocking like a puzzle
I fall into to moment when your warm body
                                                Is pressed against mine
Keep me warm, on these lonely and cold nights
All I’ve ever needed was you, all I wanted was you
Now that I have you, please don’t stray too far from me
Crazy at times and insecure I can be
Always remember that you mean everything
Even when things are going wrong
I’ll keep holding on
For as long as you want me too
Awake me from a dream within a dream
Hoping that you’ll still be here when my eyes break open
Letting in the morning sun

Author notes

Just something written fast... not the best work.
Written December 11th, 2005

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  • Owl
    January 12, 2006
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    Excellent

    Hey beautiful girl. =P just wanted to say hi to my favorite cherie. This poem is amazing. Really excellent. Is it about your current boyfriend? What was his name again? Is it the guy I met that one day a while back when u visited my kingdom hall?
    Anyway take care and keep up the awesome work.
    Much love.

    Aloha,
    -Owl

  • Stanza
    December 12, 2005
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    Your writing skills are improving very well, maybe to you this isn't "your best" but your overall ability to write is much better now than it use to be. Keep at it!