Where there is love
The heart is light
Where there is love
The day is bright
Whrere there is love
There is a song
To help when things are going wrong
Where there is love
There is a smile
To make all things seem more worthwhile
Where there is love
There is an apparent peace
A tranquil place where termoils cease
Love changes darkness into light
And makes the heart flutter.
Author notes
Written December 11th, 2005
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Nice poem. I think it is really interesting. Keep up the good work.
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Thank u 4 reading it
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Sweetness, I'm not all about short poems, but this one was good. It had a certain flow that I haven't really seen before, but that I could read fluently. Excellent job, I hope to see more of you.
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Thank u 4 both the comment and the applause
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beautiful
Wow,that's really beautiful.It's so bright and breezy and LOVEly!!! Can I print this off for my kids? Well done and I REALLY hope you write more like this.
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wonderful
This was so beautiful. I really liked the rhyming and as you have read my author page you know why... I loved the part about the song... It was soooooo charming. A great defenition of 'love'. Well done! -
thank u 4 reading it
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i liked this a lot, it was very nicely written and very true, it just makes me think of time with my boyfriend, well done and keep on writing xxx
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