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Breathing is just a waste of time

Breathing is just a waste of time
when you have nothing left to do but rhyme
why can't i stop this silly game
that puts me into this deep shame
why can't i stop loving you
maybe it's because of the things you do
why do you have to criticize
i can always tell by the looks in your eyes
why can't you just show me how much you care
i can see your love every time i catch your stare
if you don't love me that's okay but at least
i know that we've got the peace coming our way
if love was as easy as breathing air
then breathing is just a waste of time
and i don't have a care.

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i wrote this very quickly tell me what u think..

jake i love you !
Written December 11th, 2005

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  • Captured-Angel
    December 11, 2005
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    AWESOME!!

    This is awesome!! I LOVE it!!! I'm going to read some more of your poems

    Edited on Dec 11, 1:33 because ''.