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Hades




Cast into the depths of Hades flames
Lies the soul of a once has been predator
Young girls of virginal status
Whom in which he preyed
Now he stands alone
Being tortured for sins
Ones he knowingly committed
Bowing before the God of the underworld
Claiming a mortal soul for the Gods
One Guilty of playing a Gods game
Forever bound to a torturous hell
Always reminded of a mortal life that once was
But instead now,
A mere toy for the enjoyment of the Gods

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Written December 10th, 2005

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    December 19, 2006
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    Damn right, Hades shouldn't have been so stupid... Well, that wasn't very mythological was it? But nobody wants to P off Zeus and the other God's... But that's not the point. I love this write, so true... After all he took Persephone, didn't he? Well written, keep it up!


  • Celticmoon
    December 16, 2005
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    oh yes Hades and I get along rather well when the need arises.......LMAO

    I shall say no more than that!


  • Soul-2-Soul
    December 16, 2005
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    Remind me not to get on your bad side...but there seems to be an underlying message here that i think is important and it should be commended that you write about it...this is one of those poems that can be used for educational purposes...and you definitely put him in the right place, this is one time the devil does something good ... torture those who sin in evil


  • Celticmoon
    December 12, 2005
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    of course you can save the pic sis.
    Be my guest

    Glad you like this dark piece.
    And thank you for your kind words always.


  • FallingSideways silver member
    December 12, 2005
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    Truly a powerful and poignant piece that leaves me with empathatic pangs of pity.
    Best Wishes Always
    ~Swt


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    December 11, 2005
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    excellent~

    Wow sis
    This is a wicked pic can I right click and save it for my collection...
    Loved the dark poem too.....Great imagery in this for his mortal life is now indeed doomed to hell
    Fantastic dark poem....
    Love n hugs
    Susan~~~

  • pochacco
    December 11, 2005
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    haha yeah its pretty obvious that the guy in the poem is screwwwwwed. it seems like the last half of it it kinda of repetitive in a way, I don't know how to describe it


  • xSallyxDollx
    December 11, 2005
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    Wow this poem was evil I loved it! You did a great display of imagery words and how the bad person is down in hell. You did a great job on this, I can't even go into detail about how good this poem is. Keep it up!

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