Nothing can change her.
She’s the monster not them
She needs room to breathe.
To let her monster consume the doubts.
It’s only gotten her to the top.
Only is it really the bottom?
The lies. The smoke and mirrors.
She’s the champion, the winner.
Nothing can penetrate her emotions.
She knows no one cares.
Nothing to comfort her.
The smoke and mirrors fade.
Her tears are drying.
Wrists are submitted to the pain she’s had forever.
Nothing can change her.
Author notes
GAH THIS SUCKS SO MUCH THAT I HAVE TEARS IN MY EYES!
Written December 10th, 2005
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Hey i just had this sorta dream like thing i have to tell it to you i think it;s absolutely beautiful but i don't know...i wanna make it a poem/song mostly song
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NO I'm not mad that you wrote something....I'm glad that you did!
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ur mad cuz i wrote something aren't u?
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I didn't mean nothing by it....you said GRRR...and i was just saying what you said as like a question...there was nothing wrong with the poem..it was fine...honest.
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i'm sorry i;ll take it off....actually i'll take my whole self off of this site. i'll delete every single thing i have written since it never mattered to anyone
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Grrr....
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GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
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