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..time..

Trapped in lies
left in darkness
hollow inside
she feels it is her time to die
she wants to cry
but instead she uses the knife
cuts down her wrists
with a simple reason to end all of this.

Author notes

got bored it suxs !!!
honesty i just wanted to use the gold membership lol
Written December 10th, 2005

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  • LivingPain
    December 11, 2005
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    good poem
    exactly how i feel
    good job


  • MisJudged
    December 11, 2005
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    lol. I know since when do we have gold memberships? I havent been on in a few days. lol. But i loved the poem, short and to the point and the icon made it even more kick ass....but yeah....


    CALL HIM


    if you havent already...

    He wants you to.
    Well I LOVE MY ASIA SOO FREAKING MUCH.
    Allie


  • silenced soul
    December 10, 2005
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    AWESOME

    this is awesome stasier i really liked it it didnt suck at all you suck for thinking it sucked lol luv you lots ~Lissa~


  • KissMyEyes
    December 10, 2005
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    wow this is awesome lol