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Frozen day


Lo! The sky ascends with its charming light,


They day tries to make its ordinary flight,


But at an extraordinary height,


Stood an angelic figurine with her sultry smile,


Soft yet silent she few to ground,


Like a spring river, to the destination it flow,


To unite her divine spirit with a demonic soul,


In a dark ritual that fire burns in purple,


As these soul touch and feels,


Every light and sounds, it self sealed,


Ignites a holy fire in a demonic chest,


The put forward the dark hand, to invite an angel, sweet yet frenzied,


To the place of fire, that she her self ignited,


The butterflies were seen all over,


But yet not inside them,


They were warm and calmed, both physical and spiritual,


But then when liquid eyes are perceived,


The fire doubled, triple and quadruple its heat,


Butterflies that were in itself contempt, stormed into them as the end of days,


They are bereft of all words,


In the unique language, their liquid eyes speak to one another,


Behold! Like a falling leaves the angel ascends,


To unite, not just her spirit, but herself,


To this Lucifer in the flesh,


The time froze, the light dimmed,


The fires burns, the butterflies excites,


They united in their ideal might,


The touch were warm yet passionate,


Speed yet slow, Struck yet flow,


Extreme spiritual in their entwined physical,


Lights conquered the darkness, and darkness the light,


To the world, the day may have made its ordinary flight,


But to these souls, the day was frozen and with them it stayed.

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Written December 10th, 2005

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  • Ellis Rose
    December 11, 2005
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    wow this was really amazing and so beautifully written i loved it well done mate

  • Bads
    December 10, 2005
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    Heyyyyy thanx!!! Yea i think it have a beauty cuz it just happened and written down. Many lines are deep and have many meaning in it self....
    Really thnx man...Ur comment means a LOT to me!!!!!!!!!


  • Requiem of the Wolf
    December 10, 2005
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    wowie...

    Wow...i can't even begin to discribe the beauty of this poem...it's just amazing...excellent flow...good word usuages....just...wow....