she awakens from the dream with tears in her eyes,
for once again her hearts desire was given to her,
and then ripped away at the seams.
the smoke fills the room and her heart cant breathe,
and this time no ones there to break her fall.
she's alone and its realization time my darling,
realise that you brought this upon yourself.
tell yourself the truths you've hidden from others,
and admit to your imperfections + flaws.
he was her romantic scene stripped of its film,
and tossed at her feet, her new way out.
she was his escape from the dangers and
eye opener into this thing called love.
and he was perfect.
she let herself drown again in her sea of
emotions not yet discovered and he kept
her floating above water with her lungs left
below.
he was most deffinatley her poison and for
this she cant forget..
that she loves him. more than anyone ever before,
and now my darling wake up into your reality
and see that you lost him.
you lost him...
on your own.
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written with words straight out of my heart, towards the love of my life timothy henry and i would love to hear feedback.
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Written December 10th, 2005
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great
that was a good poem i cant tell you had to bleed it out -
this was a really touching poem...I can't even properly comment it because it hit home so hard...thank you
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caitling this was really amazing...
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This makes me wanna cry....o h man..it really sucks wehn you realize that suddenly everything is lost....this is an amzing write....
by the way..thanx for commenting on my work. I truly appreciate it
Keep up the great work
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awesome
awwee caitlin!! This was really good. I can tell it was straight for your heart! awe girl! Keep going strong and your head up girl! Things happen for a reason! I love ya
<3
Fallon
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