This terse verse
would get worse
If I should curse!
Author notes
Just count 'em
Written December 10th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- 10 Words by BlackenedSoul10.
600 points, ended December 17, 2005, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Hi! S.W.
Yes. It's shorter than most comments but manages to take a swip at some of the foul language I read here. I liked it too.
Thanks for writing.
Jim S -
This really had me laughing. It's really cool!
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Thanks for reading and writing. I'm glad you liked what you saw.
Jim S
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if and buts were candy and nuts!!!
I really liked this poem. I also read
LANGUAGE, it reminded me that the foundation fo rall cultures is langauge. So whether intended or not i was getting taht you tooo feel as though your culture is evolving if not evading you. I look upon the picture of you reading ant the poetry club with envy. Shyness keeps me from ding the same.
Bravo thanks for sharing~ -
That's what happens when a teacher starts writing
I too keep a dictionary handy when I am reading on this site.
Thanks for your comments and generous applause.
Jim S
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I've been a bit erratic with reponses lately. Sorry.
I'll try and have a scan of your work soon. Meanwhile thanks for peaking at mine. I hope to add a few more before the old year runs out.
Jim S
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Another new word in my vocab added. Thanks for sharing. Amazing short rhyming piece. My applause.
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LOL.....good...and funny. I also am a bigger fan of rhyming poetry with flow and rythm. Check out some of my stuff if you want to.
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Hi again!
Glad you've found some of my stuff to your liking. Once again thanks for that generous applause.
Jim S -
i like it and its fun if you repeat it alot and say it fast lol
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Thanks Leander.
The muse must have been nearby.
Jim S -
Quite wonderful how you managed to put those rhymes into a ten worded line very well done!
I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Leander -
Thanks Steve
Jim S -
Thanks for reading and writing Malabu
Jim S -
Thanks Michelle glad you liked it.
Jim S -
adj. terser, tersest
Brief and to the point; effectively concise: a terse one-word answer.
[Latin tersus, past participle of tergre, to cleanse.]
Unfortunately my poem had to have ten words not one LOL but I believe it was quite terse!
Jim S -
Lol. Well I think you nailed this one Jim, it is quite a clever piece. I hope you do well in the contest. Take care and Have fun. Steve
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well all I need for this is a a nursery rhyme......piano tune and a good voice to recite the tale.....lol......guess I have to just laff.....but its a good thing...
Malabu -
frustrated are we?
rothflmao!!! so much emotion in so few words!!
Good luck in the contest!
~Michelle~
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Nice rhyme but might I ask, what does terse mean? And I didn't mean you couldn't curse just don't be like shit this *cks up my whole screwed up *ckin' life...Or anythin' like that...
Edited on Dec 10, 11:04 because ''.
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