I blankly stare at a million poets
blankly staring at their page
I send a blank blink out to them.
They're darkly blinking back at me.
So dark the poets blinking blankly
at the million pages bare
with nothing outpouring from those blinking
blankly blinking darkly there.
So I take one’s hands and press the keys-
her motor skills have gone astray;
I type a word, just any word,
and it is her first word of the day.
She gives me a smile, blank gratitude there,
undoes her blouse, let's down her hair;
and now she has me blankly staring
at two blank bosoms nearly bare.
I suck some wind and pluck some courage
and take a blank page lying there
and scrawl a doodle suggestively
and blankly sit down next to her.
What is next, I blankly ponder
my mind is one big white, blank slate,
and as we peer into the yonder
we then blank-love begin to make!
On the swivel chair, hot and deep,
nothing free except our feet
which begin to type an epic poem
and in an hour it is complete-
An epic poem of 'nothingness'-
about blank pages full of holes,
with a million blank eyes staring through.
I dim the lights, tuck in our toes…
So we're mutually inspired now
all begun with long, blank stares.
We turned somethin’ outta’ nutin’
then made wild love there in her chair!
Casualties? There were only twoses:
our sore toeses, and blank muses
which were lost in that bunch of nothingness.
a late-night collaboration with the dark side of a blankly staring SwtAsWine
Author notes
dark (her), humor (me), erotica- a fitting description of this encounter...
Written December 10th, 2005
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Very sexy..but with the doodle, I say stick to poetry..lol..Great poem!
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Cool write. I think that your suggestive doodle added a sense of class to this already classy poem. it was an interesting poem. This poem is so creative i dont know what to say. its trully amazing I like the beginnin the best.
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the witty approach taken to this write from two accomplished writers are both highly and creatively unique
Rae -
You pushed me into an uncomfortable space with your picture and then your write and doodle. I don't know what to say except shock art lives. You are creative as all heck.
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very interesting
That was really good. it was different and amusing. i really enjoyed this. didnt fully understands ome parts, but im young and have ADD. hahaha. but yesss, very friggin good! -
Lovely poem... "An epic of nothingness" I love that line, Keep up the fantastic work! Keep writting ... youve just mad a fan
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Great sexy piece
I liked your use of external rhyme and internal rhyme here Keep writing, the narrative here was really good Good use of repetition and alliteration
All the best
Pozo
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This almost had me tongue tied reading it aloud but after I got so far into it... I decided to hush my mouth!
I DO still have children in the home ya know. Great collaboration you two! Late night thoughts...MMMmmm.
Touchof1der
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LOL... ook... This is very um interesting!!! You two did a great job on this interesting write!!! Keep up the good work!!!
Hugs,
Beth -
"Here blankly blinking back at the both of you nefew"!Your suggestive doodle looks remarkable like my boredom messing with an Etch-A-Scatch.This has a randomness to it.Kinda like wee hours mind meanderings I do.Well,not exactly in this direction.But just as random.Loved it!~~~Suseann
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very creative and slightly random but i like it well done i love the line we then blank love begin to make! excellant xx Cheryl
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Gosh bro, this is the creepiest but coolest thing I've read in awhile lol. Your imagination blows me away sometimes.
Your sis,who's blankly blinking
at you both.
~Lyrical
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been there...was cool to see someone put words and images to that state of mind. Thanks for sharing. happy haolidays. best of wishes to you and yours this holiday season. i liked your poem. look forward to reading more of your writing in the future. good luck. peace.
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very differnt but i liked it alot was a very creative write with great wording here great stuff and keep up the great work my friend
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How ...blank... I like the word play in this, creating alliteration. Very well done I must say. All shto blank stares giving shivers...
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this is absolutely delicious
the play of words just drew me in holding me fascinated not so much with the subject but with the creativity of your words. what a great way to start my day
i applaud the poet and the poem
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computers do that to ya! all the time, just never know what their memory holds, a bit of a mystery, when they get tired and depressed ya gotta watch out.. the wallet becomes suggestively bare..lol.. love this piece wayne, your doodles always gives us something to think about.. keep typing away my friend..
Linda -
Wow, is right. This is such an amazing and very unique poem, I just loved it. The flow was so easy and smooth, and the pics you added just enhanced it that much more. Fantastic poem!!
~Rikili
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Wow, that was different...I had to read it several times, because my mind doesn't function well at 4 am...I was staring blankly at the computer screen until I read this over a couple of times, and then it made me laugh for some reason...Thanks for helping me with my wake up call, lol. Much love to you both,
Nicole
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