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Bones

Missing image

Exposed

she’s bathed in moonbeams

bare but for a necklace

made of bones.


They chatter secrets

as she dances for the stars

and shimmer down her chest

like polished stones.


Their gentle rhythm

echoes laughter in the night

To be carried by the wind

across the land.


And her ancestors gather there

inside the light.

Their spirits called through time

by her command.


She listens to the wisdom

of their words.

Ancient secrets offered

to her vision quest.


Then she pricks her breast

her blood a sacrifice

that turn the bones

to rubies where they rest.


She sways in fluid motion

on the rock.

As she communes

with other souls that we can’t see.


Till in the darkest hours

she learns the truth

That every moment holds

eternity.



Patricia Gibson-Williams

December 10, 2005

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I started out trying to write this in more of a free verse then it turned out to be.  I hope you like it anyway.  Patti
Written December 10th, 2005

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  • cherche -d -ame
    January 4, 2006
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    I am almost spooked now...I picked this write of yours to return the favor of you commenting on "Legacy Of A Woman".The two writes seem to have originated with the exact same thought in mind.....ancestorial legacy. So of course I enjoyed reading it very much and it is a concrete and tight presentation ( nothing superfluous and no filler words)

    reenie


  • Cat
    December 10, 2005
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    It is lovely as is. I find it to be mostly free verse and have absolutely no problem with it at all. I am just happy you were able to unleash your muse and offer such a lovely poem.

    thank you

    m

  • Vampiric Fox Demon
    December 10, 2005
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    Beautiful, simply beautiful. I love the emotion and style. The details give a great mental picture. Keep up the great work and good luck in the contest!