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Stocking Love

Walking upon my life
But noticing that someone
Is actually standing there
And waiting for me.
You woke me up
From a dream that hit badly;
You stood there watching
Listening to every word
I had to say...
You kept waiting and waiting
Just for the moment to hit,
And when it came close
You eagerly opened with joy!

Just seeing you
Made me to be stocking
Like lightening
But a good one.
Because what I felt
Wasn't a lie
Trust me on that one.
Especially when my heart
Has been torn too many times;
But of your kindness
And weirdness...
I've been touched
Like a healing touch!

Don't you feel what I feel?
..Special and some of love..
If you don't..
You'll find a great deal in return that
'Even I wouldn't know about'
But then maybe I will!


~ Sedusha ~

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~Thoughts coming and me typing~
God Bless!
Written December 9th, 2005

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  • Abdul T Alishtari
    December 10, 2005
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    Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari

    My dear This is wonderful. Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari


  • SapphireStars
    December 10, 2005
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    That's great that you're feeling better Sedusha! I hope whoever's making you feel better more keeps on cheering you up! Nice background too!! shining lightning~ We don't get a lot of those here in my place Anywho, onto the poem!

    Your poem has a good feeling The hope and flash of happiness seems to be a great change in the mood too Love you lots and hope your days are electrifying!
    Luffles~
    ~Ibar~