she looks in the mirror
with swollen eyes
holding her stomach
that she tried to hide
sixteen years old
and two months along
he hadn't said anything
he knew he was wrong
she had said no
he didn't listen
she had tears in her eyes
and they started to glisten
so many lies
when she gave him her love
she gave him respect, devotion, and care
if he wanted her to she'd give him the stars above
when he found out what he'd done
he denied it was him
told her she's crazy
called her a whore
told her he
didn't want her anymore
as she looks in the mirrow
tears roll down her face
what was she to do
what an awful disgrace
why did he do this
how could he not care
what did she miss
why did they have to stare
Author notes
Written December 9th, 2005
A contest entry
- Dark or Morbid poems! by xToxicxCupcakesx.
375 points, ended April 24, 2007, 24 entries
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Comments
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wow! just wow! i cant really think of anything to say...this is really good! finalists! YAY!
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omg emily!..this is soo good!!...and i like the fact that you talked about something that is real and things that actually happen these days..ya know?...your putting it in her point of view and everything..its great!..love you
-nessa
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