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My heart and soul


Like a spirit I
lovingly by you spy
invisible to especially you
if you only knew

Were I so emboldened
to offer gifts golden
wrapped in vestments old
would you be cold

You could love me
which I easily see
your gentleness and mirth
my openness to girth.

If I revealed myself
to your heart's wealth
you may take or
come through my door.

I want to run
but to you come
for your flame entire
sets my wings afire.

So, from deep within
beneath my alabaster skin
where wettest souls begin
you infect my grin.

If perchance my friend
would only begin again
flirt, possessing, releasing now
God begat these smiles.

I rub your back
massaging and using tact
putting under my palms
all type of charms.

Hotly I do burn
as my soul yearns
flows as you churn
to this I return.

The three magic words
often misspoken and unheard
how I dream so
that creme also flows




by Celticmoon
and Mage Amazigh

Author notes

It is a collab with Mage Amazigh and me, Celticmoon.
Written December 9th, 2005

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  • Celticmoon
    December 16, 2005
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    This was the first collab between my brother and I. I am quite pleaed with it's final presentation


  • Soul-2-Soul
    December 16, 2005
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    nicely done. great word choices and combinations.

    u 2 work well together.


  • metrophobiac
    December 11, 2005
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    YES YES YES! THIS is what I am talking about! WELL DONE! (not that I didnt love Tables Turned, but this definitely fits under the genre of "Elegant Erotica"! Bekah


  • Abdul T Alishtari
    December 10, 2005
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    Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari

    This is good study for you bringing sensuality forward. Ladies are right to demand their feelings be addressed by lovers.
    Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari


  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    December 10, 2005
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    I liked this poem. It was one of those poems that I had to read twice, but that's okay. It was written beautifully. Good Job you two!
    ~Jay~


  • FallingSideways silver member
    December 9, 2005
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    Truly a beautiful start and is wonderful as is. The sentiments and emotions are not lost.
    Best of Wishes to the both of you
    ~Swt


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    December 9, 2005
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    excellent~

    Well I love it........and can't wait for the finished poem
    I especially love the first stanza...
    Love the background too.........
    Love n hugs
    Susan~~~

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