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To My Maryjane

I remember that first day I picked you up.
with my aunt on her birthday,
everything was different.
I'd never had you before and now here you are.
part of my everyday rutine.
Before school,
so I know what the hell I'm doing in class.
During lunch,
so I can get my high back and do what I need to.
After school before I get home,
so I can do my homework and my mom will leave me alone.
I'll eat and then smoke some more,
but this time it's so I can go to sleep,
and rest like the dead.
Then I start all over again,
because your the best Maryjane.

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this is my first time entering one of thess contest...it seemed like a lot of fun to write about this...but i think this one kinda sucks i'll get better at it...
Written December 9th, 2005

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  • IWantToBeFree
    January 9, 2006
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    really???...i hope that's a good thing...really i do...i'm glad you liked it...i just wish that i could have been there to laugh with you...thanks for the comment...hugs and kisses...<3Anna


  • January 9, 2006
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    cute, I think this is the first poem of yours that made me laugh.


  • JePeTto
    January 8, 2006
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    nice poem, i understand what you're saying here. nice write.


  • starlite
    December 17, 2005
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    hey sweetheart! good job! good luck in the contest hunneh!! love ya! xoxo Jana <3