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Final Sin

 

Can you see the tears fall, as one runs down my face

 

Can you see my bloodshot eyes, staring into space?

 

The thought of falling asleep, and not waking up makes me smile

 

The call to get help I shall not dial

 


I bite my tongue when you are around

 

Blood is better then tears falling to the ground

 

You said you loved me then why am I alone

 

Why do I feel so helpless, so sad and cold?

 



There’s no better love then from the family and friends

 

But everyone’s time comes and everything must end

 

Tonight is the night where my dream comes true

 

Tonight is the night where I died and flew

 


Flew to a better place no one will see

 

Is this the only way you’ll think of me?

 

If that’s so then the knife brushes my skin

 

Tonight ill commit my final sin.

Author notes

i havent written in a long time so i just tried.
Written December 9th, 2005

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  • east efforts
    September 15, 2006
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    kate i dont like this, it's to damn negitive. and you know i hate when you hurt yourself, and i hope you werent talkin bout me when u said "You said you loved me then why am I alone"
    you know i will always love you


  • Lost In My Thoughts
    January 14, 2006
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    I am finally starting to feel like love is wearing away from my soul, I don't want it to happen adn i am completely terrified if it does leave me because I don't htink i will be able to handle it. I think My soul would actually die. It's so frightening. Cutting isn't always the answer but I am not trying to change who you are. there are other safer ways to deal with stress such such as talking, what my friend would do he would have a rubber-band around his wrist and snap it whenever he got stressed ad it would work. I wish you luck with life and everything in it. Keep up the good work!

    Tiffany