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Just To Please You








Steal the stars from the sky
Engrave your name in each
Paint a portrait of you
Upon the surface of the moon
Travel the world searching
For the perfect rose
Lay it upon your pillow
Before you sleep
Say I love you
With lil hidden notes
Leave you in the morning
With an "I'll miss you" kiss
Welcome you home
With a "come and get me" grin
Embrace you with my warmth
When you are cold
Wipe your tears when you cry
Call you in the dead of night
Just to hear your voice
Let you know I miss you
When you aren't there
Whisper I love you
When you hold me near
Let the heat of my passion
Ignite the flames in your soul
Put your hand on my chest
Let you feel my heart race
Tend your wounds
When you get hurt
Nurse you back to health
When you get sick
Be there when you need me
Show you I care
Listen when you talk
Comfort you when scared
Seduce you with my kiss
Melt you with my touch
Tell you I want you
Tell you I need you
Do all I could
Just to please you

 

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Written December 8th, 2005

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  • Krispy Kreme
    January 7, 2006
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    Aww beautiful Write! An amazing piece, such sweet, pure beauty, romantic and very tasteful Piece! This is a deepful and very emotionful write, right from the heart. Thank you for entering my contest, good luck and hope all goes well
    ~ Ebony ~


  • Celticmoon
    December 16, 2005
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    I have no concern for any man but the one who has my heart.
    He has no idea of what he truly does to me. I can only hope this shows him just that much more of my love.

    Thanks for you're kind words once again hun


  • Soul-2-Soul
    December 16, 2005
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    I feel bad for all those guys who's hearts you're gonna break. But to the one you get, he better realize what a vision of love you are because with something like this, and to confess what your heart desires to world, one could only be so lucky to have a woman so willing to sacrifice her heart to the one she cherishes.
    this is a beautiful write...and the women should take notes on this on how to show the man they love what he does for her. cuz men need affection and if this was to me, i'd be pretty damn happy.


  • Celticmoon
    December 9, 2005
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    Many can long my dear but only one can have me


    Edited on Dec 09, 11:03 because ''.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 9, 2005
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    Sexy Love!!!

    Now that's my kinda gal!
    I found myself looking through catalogs to order one of these babes...I couldn't find one no wheressss..lmbo! What a woman, you keep on penning like this, you're going to need a shield to fight off all those staring eyes...How many long for a gal like this...Time, love, and tenderness...awe, I love this write!

    Much love sweet soul!
    -Timothy The Poetic Weaver

  • Celticmoon
    December 9, 2005
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    Thank you my dear Carrie.
    Your words are always a delight to read.



  • Sunkissedrose
    December 9, 2005
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    Simply wonderfully erotic, without being to much. I love reading your works because no matter the message you always convey it eloquently.
    ~Carrie


  • Celticmoon
    December 9, 2005
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    My dear I am the lady and this was written for a man

    Thank you for kind words.


    Blessings
    celticmoon


  • getsbetter
    December 9, 2005
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    This was an absolutely beautiful written poem. Flow was great and the rhymn was right there, The picture set the tone of the poem perfect. I'm still breathing hard, DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN good poem, Getsbetter

  • Cobalt Blue
    December 9, 2005
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    Wow what a wonderful write you have written here. I am very impressed by how you got such emotion into your poem. Who ever the lucky lady is that you were writting this to should feel privledged to have someone who is obviously very enamored with her


  • Iohagh
    December 8, 2005
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    If a man wrote that to me, I'd be in trouble. Great write.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    December 8, 2005
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    excellent~

    Beautiful and I hope whom ever you wrote this poem about does return the favor as well....
    A beautiful poem of Love sweetie
    Hugs
    Susan~~~

  • Painful Tears Fall
    December 8, 2005
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    out- satnding

    this was amazing! i loved it. you you such sweet words that all seemed to flow into one great letter. this had to be one of my favorite poems ever! you made it almost into a story you told about looking for that perfect rose dan laying it on your pillow. i loved that it was really really cute. i loved this a lot! great job! can't wait to read more of your great pieces!


  • Tarja
    December 8, 2005
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    wow. magnifecient poem beautiful words in a beautiful way. ... the woman in the picture is very beautiful as well. who is she?


  • December 8, 2005
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    it was nice reading your work. The person for whom you wrote this should consider themselves lucky, indeed. Its sometimes the small things in life that mean so much. Great Job.


  • dame de la riviere
    December 8, 2005
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    i hope whomever you wrote this to replied with visa versa...such dedication and willingness to please is wonderful, but ought to be returned with the same ardure. a very sweet, romantic write. you captured all the little attentions of love. well done. peace be with you

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