she flies in my life
healing me without knowing
~richelle~
Author notes
senryu
Written December 8th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- haiku to friends - part 4 - by Mari Goes.
300 points, ended December 12, 2005, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Very powerful peace, you can say it and people can imagine it. It is romantic put also friendship too. Great write
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This was beautifully said with a gorgeous piece of imagery to go with it
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So full of promise hope love and expressed compassion for self and someone special. Wonderfully underexpressed and very thought provoking. I am truly impressed. Congrats and thank you for the work you do.
Sylvyr -
So little words, yet with so much power within them. Letting your emotions go running across the paper seems to be a talent that you possess greatly. Awsome work here, keep the pen moving dear. ~val~
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powerful
A powerful statement. You expressed your emotion perfectly. Your gratitude is obvious. -
Charming
This was sooo deep. Flying... healing... so emotional.... Good luck in the contest. And keep on writing good stuff... -
This is beautiful.
I love the background image as well.
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I'm not familiar with your friend but you have obviously touched their heart through your words. Friends are truly gifts that come along only once in a while. Best wishes in the contest~vj
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crystaldust 10-12-05 22:06
A perfect senryu, Cheryl, saying so much with so few words. Your richelle must be an exceptional friend to have you write with such love and caring. Beautiful poem and heart-warming news that, in your own words, you are getting better.
Joy
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excellent~
Beautiful......and I love the pic too
Best of luck in the contest
Hugs
Susan~~~
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You know many times people never know just how they have touched another in life. This haiku speaks of gratefulness to your friend, how lovely that she knows she made a difference. It also makes me think of all those who have touched me in some way. I thank you for the reminder. Such a great tribute you have written. Blessings to you Lil
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Cheryl , absolutely beautiful and touching. Whomever Richelle is has just recieved a gift from above with your words and picture. Best wishes in this contest,
Reenie
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A beautiful senryu and picture. I hope you truely are healing my friend as I too slowly am.
Jim -
This is so sweet, good luck in the contest. I see you couldn't resist birdifying it!
That's awesome. I love the slightly metaphorical edge to it. Great job!
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Yes i see this is written to Richelle and there are few people in this life whom i would trust with my life, you are one of them, one of only a very small handful of exclusive friends who i let in. Richelle is blessed beyond the capacity of understanding to have a friend like you, a trusted confidant. If i could have any wish in this world it would be that you would know how much you have blessed my life with your encouraging words of hope when I was down and despairing for life. To hold on and know someone accepted me as I am. I wished my borther had someone to confied in befor he died of AIDS, someone he could trust as Richelle has trusted you. Blessings and best wishes.
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Beautiful picture followed by a very good senryu
It's nice to know someone that makes us feel andthink this way.
Thanks for bringing your words to this contest
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Beautiful. Obviously someone has found their way into your heart Cheryl. I love that picture too, I have it on an old write of mine....somewhere. Nice job. Good luck in the contest.
~Lyrical
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