Beneath the mistletoe on Christmas Eve,
on the couch by the warm fire.
I hold you tight in my arms,
your eyes sexy in the flickering light.
Beneath the mistletoe on Christmas Eve,
your eyes light up the darkened room.
Soft, tender, and sweet,
deep with passion my lips meet yours.
Beneath the mistletoe on Christmas Eve,
every curve of your lips I love.
I hold you tighter with my strong arms,
and your body fills my hopes and dreams.
Beneath the mistletoe on Christmas Eve,
your beautiful body I take into me.
Beneath the mistletoe on Christmas Eve,
we make a gift for Christmas Day.
Beneath the mistletoe . . .
Beneath the mistletoe . . .
Beneath the mistletoe . . .
Author notes
This is about lovers during the night before Christmas. The next day they will find out they have the most precious gift ever. A baby!
With Love,
ArchAngel
Written December 8th, 2005
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WWWooooow! This make me want a mistletoe, so I can hold my baby!LOl Cool piece here! Your Kung Fu is Strong!!!
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aww...babies are so sweet! cute write...
~*~*CJ*~*~ -
this is really cute, and i like the decription you used, and the line about the curve of the lips, all in all this a very nice write, especially for the holidays~~~nice write~~~jaded
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I won't say anything stupid like I did the last time. LOL. This was sweet and certainly better than my stupid Christmas poem. At first I thought this was written about Kelli cuz you left a copy on her desk. Anyways, great job and you know the deal
Schmitty -
aw. Beutifuly written poem. Great job!
Cahdna
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awwww yes i remember times under the mistletoe
---this was a very sweet and beautiful write---just the thing for christmas and lovers!. well done i loved this poem.
love.
shaz xx
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yes this is a wonderful poem, lots of love shows here and the poem has a nice flow with it, very good....
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Great poem!! very deep. and nicely written.
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it is a woderful poem with depth and the scene fits in my mind perfectly.
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This is sweet poem great job!
love my darling and Merry Christimas,
andie -
Glad we're all in the christmas spirit enjoyed it very much.
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even though it's not freshest concept,it's really sweetly written...nice read
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Now that is just too cute. I like it.
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AWW!!! Man this sucks . . I'm still alone on Christmas . . LoL no ne ways this was really really really sweet. I really liked the emotion you put into it, I can see you writing this poem . . Lol, I like this side of you the sweet sexy romantic type, you should try it more often. Ne ways read this to Brandi and she'll fall in love with you . . Ne ways I really liked this.
~shannon marie~ -
Well Danny, as you say on each of my poems, this isn't really my style. I thiknk it was well written and on an OK subject! You are a good poet!! Kepp up the good work!! (Of course, since I wrote a LOVE poem gag I think YOU should write another DARk poem!! lol!)
Pyro Freak
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