i pulled and ripped her lacy pants,
i bit her stocking tops,
she threw her hands behind her head,
and begged me "please don't stop".
my tongue was working overtime,
her wetness soaked my face,
my filthy hands were on her breasts,
as she quickened up the pace.
she pulled my head in deeper,
then held me with her thighs,
her sharp stilettos in my back,
brought water to my eyes.
her love juice trickled down my throat,
i felt her body shake,
my hands began to tremble,
it was the boss for goodness sake.
my overalls were long gone,
bits an pieces everywhere,
she hitched her skirt and turned around,
and bent across the chair.
i eased myself in gently,
it felt so warm and nice,
and as i drove in deeper,
she gripped me like a vice.
she knew just how to bring it on,
she knew just what to say,
when she told me that i had to cum,
she surely got her way.
i tried to be defiant,
i tried to tell her no,
when she asked me if i liked my job,
i had to let it flow.
she placed her mouth upon my cock,
and licked up every drop,
i felt we had just started,
why did she have to stop.
i asked her if my shift was done,
and she gave a cheeky grin,
my husbands waiting outside,
be sure to show him in...
Author notes
the piture has nothing to do with poem...its just a pic of ugly me and 1 of my sisters.....sorry to scare you folks..
Written December 8th, 2005
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damn that was hot i loved it sure made me hot ... whew...
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Not well punctuated is it?
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Wow, this was very sexy and sure did give me pleasure just reading it. Good job. This was hot!!
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Bravo. Excuse me while I got to the bathroom. you like your pussy dont you. lol. That's very hot stuff.
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mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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OOOH MY UMMMMMMM...... I AM UTTERLY SPEACHLESS. YOU ARE AWESOME
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oh my god, thats an amazing write, definetely gets teh blood flowing, what a sexy story, i cant imagine how amzingly hot it must have been to live it, if it is true,
fantastic, keep it coming -
LOL, VERY SEXY , I GOT A KICK OUT OF THIS . THE IDEA OF MAKING LOVE TO YOUR BOSS SUCH A TURN ON. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
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F*CKING RIGHT !!! the whole poem was a brillant couterpart to the first and the ending hits you!! It sneaks up on you and throws ya for a loop!! LOVED IT!!!
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Smut is good. I like Smut. Smut is SEXY!!!
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this was... wow again... I enjoyed reading this piece held my attention very well.. Keep on writing stuff like this... this is really good...
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wow that was really good i liked it alot i really liked the part about her husband waiting outside and form him to show him in. i mean really wow it would have really turned me on if it was two chicks you see im a lesbian
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awesome
Thas so fucking hott! In the office has always been a fantasy of mine...and doing your boss, your married boss, oh man..if this is aa real life story. I AM SOOO JEALOUS -
I liked this part even more. I can hardly wait to read more. I loved this piece because it has the potential to turn one on and make them laugh. Great great job. Public sex is always the hottest, even more so when it is at work... Lol and with the boss.
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sexy
i think i like it better than part 1 but it leaves me wanting more, i can't wait for part 3. good job my freind. -
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your 42????? you look 22 or 23 in the pic mood killer picture!!!!!! -
thanks for entering, you know i love your work, and i love the pic too, who's the hot guy? lol
much love
Emily
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holly Hell Freakin awesome
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Very good!!! Still love ya babe, but next time you should put an erotic pic up of you on the next poem like this!!! lol LOve Lauren
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you and this lady will have utterly nothing left to explore by the time you reach Chapter 10! but then that means another eight chapters, and by that time you'll both have reinvented yourselves, maybe get the husband to join in, maybe???
I like the comedic style of this write...it's a erotic porno-poem but you have to love it for not only the challenge of keeping the humor, but the rhyme as well! and if you're asking if I like your job here...I'll nod!!! up and and down nod...YES! LOL
you take good care Flying! I hope I've been helpful in my comments to your poem! I have to go to work now and see what the boss is UP to!
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woahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh how cool is this i love it you are soo good at this! well done Dougie very hot and steamy! excellant Bravo xx
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u and ur vivid imagination , uncle dougie!
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This is truly awesome. Rhyming erotica is hard to come by but this was definitely a great write and you put it together well. I may only be 15 but this was totally desriptive and contains everything you need in a good piece of erotica. This certainately got my imagination running overtime
well done and continue to write xXxPurexXx
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thanks a lot for your nice comments they mean a lot emily...im glad they entertain you and its the feedback from you and others that keep me doing it...x
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its great, i love part 2, and you added the perfect twist as usual with all of your poems. great job. i love the way you write, you make my imagination run wild. thanks so much for entering my contest, you did great. and i would say best of luck but....
your friend
emily
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