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In Yo' FAYCE!

Soft, sweet cries were heard the night after the trickery had been made and all mistakes had been forgotten just to have that one blissful moment. Though forbidden, love seemed to be more important in this time of despair and only one had been willing to go against the rules to give it.

The next morning, a smug, yet happy and loving grin smeared across Diente's features as he walked down the stairs with a leash in his hand. His sister, Mauve, was attached to it, wearing a red studded collar with a single silver loop to indicate what had happened.

Sharazon gave a sour glare to his son and Kira did nothing. Maybe it was all for the best.

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The sequel to Trickery, which can be found here. X3 allpoetry.com/poem/1662843

New title curtesy of Opaque Beauty, my hawt lover/sister/teen thinger!
Written December 8th, 2005

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  • Seven Kinky
    August 11

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    I think there may be more to this story and Trickery that I've completely missed. I wish I knew more about Diente. What's his deal with incestuous flings anywho?

    • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
      August 11
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      So, um...Diente was to be confined to his room or some such, 'cause Sjar was totally pissed within reason. Annnnnd....Diente's little lesbian sister comes into his room despite their dad forbidding visitorrrrssss....annnnd THEY were always close, so Mauve tries to comfort him...and then Di decides to get it on with her. Also, Mauve is a lot like Kira, so it's like...saying, "Ha, I got what I wanted" of...something like that. Lmfao.

      Did I mention that Di is exactly like Shar for the most part?

  • GauArrowny
    February 20, 2006
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    Hehe, another interesting event. Still not sure of the background events but a cute little story. What was it called previously?

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    December 9, 2005
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    Oh Em Effing Gee. You give the BEST title ideas! I really kinda wanna...have this thing...where Diente's thinking of how AWESOME he is for getting his LESBIAN sister to love him. That's be so effin' rad!

  • Victoria of Aragon
    December 9, 2005
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    Lmfaooooooooo... Name it Ner, Ner, Ner, Ner, NER! It'd be so rad.. And I'd giggle, like.. MAD GIGGLES OF DOOM. Lmao. Okay.. Yeah.. Uhmmm.. o o; RENAME IT.. "In Yo' FAYCE." .. 'Cause that title would make me giggle, too.. And, well, yeah.

    MOVING ON. I really liked this. ^ ^; I think it's true that you more than make up for the fact I hardly write about our characters. And you do it sooo prettily,too.. So, like, WHOAH YOU.

    +[ Pea Ess x|x I AM HYPER.. Can't cha' tell? ]+

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    December 9, 2005
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    My favorite part is that Diente's so smug about getting a lesbian to love him. That's why I was GOING to name it that.

  • crimsonshadow
    December 9, 2005
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    Ner, Ner, Ner, Ner, Ner.....lmfao. That's the best thing ever.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    December 8, 2005
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    You haven't been reading FD lately, have you? Kira and Diente talked it out.

  • Yunaleska gold member
    December 8, 2005
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    thank goodness! I couldn't BARE it if they both loved Kira. That would be SOOOO awkward.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    December 8, 2005
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    Like I said, it's too funny! Yeah...it is sad that Zon and Diente were like this all because of their love for Kira, but it's all worked out now!

  • Yunaleska gold member
    December 8, 2005
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    That title made me laugh (in the author's comments) This is great Rose. The friction between Zon and Diente is great and I love it, heh. I feel sorry for them both in a way too.
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