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Down the rabbithole

In my mind
and in my heart
that is where the trouble start
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All the time
and only mine
is the sorrow of my kind
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The wish to push away
and hold close to me
to let go or stay.
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I know what is best
and what can't be done
yet I am not that strong..
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forgive me for what I feel
and what I do, but
I'll never mean to hurt you..
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I refuse to make the same mistake
again and again..
yet time seems to push me
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down the same rabbit hole over and over again

Author notes

Written between 04:25 and 04:30 on 08 December 2005 by Filip H.F. "FiXato" Slagter
Written December 8th, 2005

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  • spiderweb of truth
    January 23, 2006
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    this is good, i like the rhyming...4th stanza seemed a bit off in that sense, but still a good write

  • Kryer
    December 7, 2005
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    interesting view. I liked it. It's amazing how feelings take over our soul. Nice poem.