I hate my life,
I hate my looks,
I hate my glasses,
I hate the fact that
My parents judge me
So much by my appearances.
I want it all to end.
I hate my school,
I hate some people that go there,
I hate my teachers,
I hate my classes,
I hate my social life.
I want it all to end.
I hate people,
That tell me i look bad.
I hate people,
That tell me i should do something
Better with myself.
I hate them all,
I hate them being so judgemental.
I want it all to end.
I look at myself
And try to look happy,
I can't pull that off anymore.
My friends ask me whats wrong,
But i never answer.
What do they want me to say?
I want it all to end.
I hate my family,
I hate my school,
I hate the teachers,
I hate the students,
I hate the classes,
I hate my life.
I want it all to end.
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I feel like crap. my parents are always nagging on me telling me what to eat, how to dress and what to look like. i hate them. too pushy and bossy. they need better lives.
Written December 7th, 2005
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This is sad but it's a good poem I just thought that I would tell ya that I use to think like that I thought I hated my life and thet everything sucked and im not tryin to tell u how to live ur life but one of my friends helped me so I thought I would share this . . . Not everything is as bad as we make it. You have a home, food, and clothes. Some kids live on the streets and have 1 pair of jeans other live with pimps and have to eact drugs, some kids are abused by boyfriends, girlfriends, or family . . . I just wanted you to know that no matter how bad things are you can always find sumthin happy . . . . If ya wanna talk u can e-mail me drumlinechick2007@hotmail.com or Instant Message me on AIM my sn is . . . OoEmoxxRockerOo . . . Later
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Simply put to the point, you're not hiding anything in a rhyme, you're not making it all pretty. You're making people understand what you have to say. I really like it, I could never be a blunt in a poem. I have to hide it behind all these walls of word play. You did a great job of pulling that all away, and just writing it down. I wish I could think the same way sometimes, but I always have to eloberate.
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Love it!!!!!!
This is kinda sad, really good though. No mysticism about what you are trying to get across. LOL! I feel the same way all the time, especially during Marching Band season when all the other guard girls are so skinny and beautiful and judgemental. Life is tough and throws you lots of curve balls, you just have to have to strength to see them and hit them as hard as you can into oufield and try to have a good time while you are at it. Just get through school, I hear life after it is better. I like it though, you should totally keep up the good work dude!
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