you and me
are meant to be
I love you
and you love me
is that enough to hold us together
if not then why love
our love is so strong
I have always longed
for this kind of love
you healed my heart
from everyone else
I can't live with out you
you make me
happy, full of life
and most of all you make me smile!
No one has done that in a while
you and me
are so meant to be
if not
then this is just another heart brake waiting to happen
from all the love I gave
no one has ever loved me the way you do
and I just want to
be with you
forever
we will
die hand in hand
heart to heart
lips to lips
we will love each other forever
and ever
you and me
are like two birds in the sky
so now I can finally fly
and become who I want to be
with you and me
we can be great
and we are!!!
I love you
and I have loved you all along
so far away
with every little kiss
I some how don't manage to miss
I love you so much
it hurts! Badly
but yet I have never had this kind of love before
you and me
are destined to be!!!!
~Emily
To my boyfriend Sam--- I love you Sam!!!!
Author notes
Written December 7th, 2005
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It was so much love you had put in the poem and I'm really happy with you about Sam , Sam is a luckily man in the world who won your heart cuz your love is really beautiful and wonderful , no wonder why he loves you so much ... just look at your poem again , well! NIcely done really , keep on writing!
papergirl -
yea me 2! but right now idk anymore i love him but so does everyone else and he flurts alot with this one girl! welll thanxz im glad u liked it
~Emily -
Young love is so sweet, especially if you're in love. This is a very sweet poem, like a promise to Sam that you'll last forever - and I hope you really do! Because special love like this should never die...
♥
~Lana 
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he does have one hey i know he is a sexy beast! whoa~ lol i love him sooooo much!!
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he looks like he has a moustashe
j/k he is vair smexy
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thanxz alot gurl! i love u!
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Written with so much love from your heart. It shows emotions in great intensity of a love so great that it hurts. ( Mind you, I am experiencing that!) To the line that you wrote, “ Is that enough to hold us together if not then why love, our love is so strong…….” Yes my child, Love is the essence of existence, without it what good living is, but realistically speaking, there is one virtue that is very essential and a must! It is very important to have UNDERSTANDING for without it, love will not last!
This is a very thought provoking poem that is written with the beauty of heart. Great job, my child! Lovely!
*love 
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awww sweetie this it totally gorgeous, im so happy you've finally found love...awww *sky gets all tearful* its a wonderful feeling, hang onto it..l8az love ya sky xxx
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This is a good poem...although it doesnt seem to have much vocab and has a simple rhyme scheme. It seems to flow nicly and speaks to me with the love portrayed. Keep writing, as you will get better as you learn. Good Write!
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awe thanxz i know he loves me as much too! but the point i tried to get across is that he is really my first meaningful love ya know! i had a love my first love but then he hurt me so i ddint believe in love agin til i found Sam! lol
well thanxz daddy!
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Your heart sings with the true beauty of love. It is a wonderful poem. Love that is meant to be will be. No distance, or time away can seperate the two hearts that are forever joined. A Love so strong can concour all. YOu wrote a very beautiful poem, with a very special meaning. I am sure your boyfriend loves you as much as you love him. I wish the two of you so much happiness.
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very good
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