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cold front passing

ice wind blows in gusts
welcomes winter in dry birth
still no snow in sight

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oops forgot to type haiku in my authors notes.

West Texas winters can be sooooo dry.
Written December 7th, 2005

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  • zellelea
    July 6, 2006
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    I love it keep on wrighting!

  • heart on sleeve
    December 8, 2005
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    we get little or no snow here in england and when it does come in more than an inch or two which isn't often it looks so beautiful lol abigailxx


  • NoWayJo
    December 7, 2005
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    was just teasing about moving to Texas, Thistle. I'm actually caught between Jersey and Virginia at the moment, but the winters in both states are rough. I'm in Jersey now, and they're already forecasting snow tomorrow night and snow's not my favorite thing! I could do humid with a good air-conditioner!

    Jo


  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    December 7, 2005
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    Lol, in some parts of texas it is dry as a bone. Which part of the state are you moving into? West texas is pretty dry, but parts of east and southern texas are pretty humid.

  • NoWayJo
    December 7, 2005
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    texas can be dry, huh? I'm moving THERE! LOL we're expecting 4-6 inches tomorrow night up here in Jersey and though I love the snow when it's falling, I wish it would be gone the very next day! congratulations on the silver for this very pretty haiku-poem!

    Jo


  • Samplette gold member
    December 7, 2005
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    That dry cold is frigid...we are supposed to get a few inches tonight. Nice haiku. Thank you for entering.
    Sam

  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    December 7, 2005
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    Lol, I am sitting here wrapped in a blanket while a frigid dry wind is blowing outside. We get so little rain here that snow is rare, but we do get freezing breezes Thanks for the comment


  • Frogzter gold member
    December 7, 2005
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    great haiku... we don't get snow here in sunny Fl. either, but it did finally cool off! Anywho, I enjoyed this... Good luck in the contest!
    Blessings
    Frog

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