Time won't change the past,
and the pain won't go away.
So stop holding back,
and come back to reality.
Living in your dream,
of what life's suppose to be,
and crying when it shows,
the past you really know.
You can't keep it back,
it's full of regrets,
and it's not going to leave.
But you know,
Monsters are created by the things left unseen.
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Written December 7th, 2005
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Eh it doesn't matter. They can say whatever...I don't really remember commenting on your poem lol. I seem to forget things in an instant lately.
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Hey you! How've you been?!? AH man, this poem is wonderful! I disagree with the first commenter. You did a great job especially with that word choice. Let's see that bastard try to write something better. lol.
Take Care,
x PatientGrace
P.S. Thank you so much for your comment and applaud on my poem "A Reborn Spirit"
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Indeed they are. Great piece. Reminds me of the cliche: "Fighting your demons". Good poem, like I said. ~James
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loved it
awesome poem -
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This is good, but the word choice isnt the greatest. Try varying your words a bit more, because that makes things more interesting to read.
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