Sunrise
Hillside shadow
Masked face smile rising
Behind the day's breath walked upon
Warmth of whispered mass lit visible as
Blush west crossed to the east touched
It lit sand of a day
New beginning
Sunrise
Fell light
As the day grew
Weary blush cooled upon
Of the first light fell upon at the end
After welcoming the sunrise over the horizon
That seeps the sunset rouge tint brisk
Sinking palsy resting
Upon the lake
Fell light
Author notes
Double Rictameter form-9-line with a syllable count-2/4//6/8/10/8/6/4/2
Written December 7th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- New Contest ... Total 600 points.. prewrites allowed. Please enter. by Manoj Sanyal.
300 points, ended December 13, 2005, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you for the interest in my poem. I thought this gave some meaning to ehe write. Haley27
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Hi dear,
Loved this poem. But, I must admit, as per contest requirement, meaning is not emerging.
Otherwise, it is a fantastic poem.
Best wishes and good luck,
manoj -
Thank you for enjoying my poem. I love the sun in the morning when it rises and sets in the evening its just magical. Haley27
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Nice description of the sun when it rises and sets in the day. I can really see what you mean when you described the morning sun. I have to say the imagery is just right for something like this. Great write. Good luck in the contest.
~Willie~
Edited on Dec 07, 6:37 p.m. because ''.
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