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As I look above to the heavens,

As I look above to the heavens,
Scattered is the canvas sky
Painted with pigments of grey colliding
Birthing from the clouds – silver lined
The rain silently sweeps solemnly
Steadily beating down on me,
Beating down on me
Washing away my sins,
My guilty filth burdening my soul
It’s blackness tattooing
Engraving – Embellishing
It’s evil writhing around me-
Leaving me branded with my secret sin
Living in seclusion
Rain, your very essence
Purifying my body
Cleansing my soul
Rain, we are together in solitude
Only me and only you
Now, I am my greatest enemy
And myself I’ve defeated once again
Who now left alone is me

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Written December 7th, 2005

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  • MaryJaneWatson
    December 8, 2005
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    flippin' awesome!!!

    Hey, eve, me and my little sis agree, it's flippin' awesome!!! Hey, my lil sis is now on allpoetry. her name is haiku2014. you might check her poetry out sometime.