Horrified and stiff are the
Only words I can use to describe the
Raging emotions that are boiling in my heart;
Ripping through me with a ferocity
I have never felt in all my life before
But none of that matters more than the
Love I've just destroyed by a simple kiss only
Ever meant as a sort of comfort without thought, and it's
Desecrating my heart just thinking of that arctic gaze
Roaring with anger and betrayal from what I dared to do, and
Even though my heart is filled with remorse, I am too
Afraid to face him for fear that he will destroy me in a
Massacre of emotion that rarely glows in his loving eyes...
So I can only hope that we'll all wake up from this horrible dream
Author notes
Zabrina is Sharazon's and Kira's daughter. She kissed her mother one night after trying to comfort her because of the loss of Kira's eldest brother. Sharazon came home in the middle of it...and...the poem pretty much explains the rest. Zabrina's feelings anyway.
Sharazon is copyrighted to Opaque Beauty. <3
Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title.
Written December 7th, 2005
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A contest entry
- Song Titles For Inspiration, Now Write In Forms! by Sadien Sathantae.
300 points, ended December 10, 2005, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Thank you for your kind words. I look forward to any further comments from you.
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This is good. It was an easy read. Good flow and vocab use. I will have to read more. You seem to have alot af talent. Keep up the good work.
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The nickname shall help in our diabolical plan to...RULE THE WORLD! Except, not really. Lmao. It IS cute though. X3
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Poor Zabberz.
YES; that is what I shall call her now. Why? It's cute, and random, and off the top of my head. 
So ner. Erm.. Yesss.. This is lovely, darling. Very sad that she feels this way, but as you said, they shall make up! And then, and then, and then, all shall be forgiven. ~Head nod action.~
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Heh...yeah...I want a membership so I can bold the words. I'm glad you liked it and and and Zabrina and Sharazon will make up. *nods* Good luck judging the contest.
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Yeah...She's feels so bad and what makes it worse is that she's the Daddy's Girl of the family and him being angry at her makes her feel awful.
But they will make up! 
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Wow, I was reading and didn't see the acrostic until I looked. =S I too feel sorry for Zabrina. Nice job, good luck in the contest.
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aww! i feel so sorry for Zabrina. It's sad that she's so afraid that it'll tear the family apart and she's so sweet. I love this acrostic Rose. You do them so successfully and brilliantly. *jealous*
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