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Drought's Erosion...

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Strong drought, see the land
cracks of erosion throughout
Rain is much needed

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Written December 7th, 2005

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 27, 2007

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    Perfect,

    You have painted your brushstrokes to fit each picture to custom when it comes to your poetry. I like what you're doing, such a masterpiece here.


    Timothy

  • Busho
    December 8, 2005
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    love the pic of the joshua tree

  • DragonsEcho
    December 7, 2005
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    I like the picture also more imagrey and how the haiku reflects what is need. good job go you!
  • Mystic Enchantress
    December 7, 2005
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    Yes mom, some parts of Mother Earth suffer from lack of rain and the places are to dry. I like the picture you put on this one. It gives the reader a better look on things, on what you conveyed into words on this haiku. Thank you mom for sharing with us. Great job! Blessed be, ♥Nena♥