My Dearest Dave,
The years have past
Things have changed
So much that I want to tell
I wish you could see
Your children now
They've grown up oh, so well
Dylan is you
And Max is Jen
Like grapes that fall from vines
They're both in school
And playing sports
They're living their life so fine
I wish you could see
All they've become
You'd be beaming with such pride!
We miss you so much
Your loving family
You'll never lose that bind
No worries my Brother
Rest assure
Your Sis is watching them
In honor to you
I made this promise
Only wish this letter I could send
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Written December 7th, 2005
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Oh Patricia, Thank you so very much for your condolences, my brother was a very special man in my life and we do all miss him dearly!! Thank you for your lovely compliments and well wishes, and the hugs are greatly appreciated!! Never can have too many of those!! Jasmine
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Hello Lynda, Thank you for your beautiful and inspirational comments!! I feel as if he is looking and I am hoping he is proud. I'm always saying, I have an Angel on my shoulder now!! He was a wonderful man with a kind soul.We all miss him dearly! Thank you again for you lovely compliments!!! Jasmine
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Jasmine, dear, this is so moving and emotional. I'm so sorry that you lost your brother, but it sounds that he was loved very much. Your poem shows how wonderfully loyal you are. Good luck in the contest, Sweetie. Hugs, Patricia
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Thank you Sandy, my brother and I were very close and his oldest is my Godchild. It was such a tragedy to all of us especially his young children to lose him the way we did. Thank you for the applause and beautiful compliments on my poem. That in itself means a lot to me! Jasmine
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WONDERFUL POEM
You have blessed us here with a beautiful and heartfelt poem for us to read. It was so lovely and sad in a way. What a wonderful sister you are to pay such a tribute to your brother. Thank you so much for sharing this heartfelt poem. Take care, god Bless you, Sandy
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Hi Linda, Thanks for the compliment and I too believe in the same.. To be honest with you.. I was reading my poem through and I changed the word suggestion that you made.. how does it feel now my friend? Hope to hear back, and I never mind help,,,as a matter of fact I love to hear honesty so never worry, I don't get offened!! Jasmine
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Jasmine Your brother did receive this letter...He is looking down on you proudly...This is an excellent poem!I love the rhythm, the rhyme, and especially the heartwarming tone! Good luck and thank you,...Lynda
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Jasmine this was a beautiful tribute to your Brother Dave. I'm sure he would love to receive this letter, but I'm sure he knows where your heart is. This was a wonderful write in all aspects. Good luck in the contest..have a lovely day, Ken...IBT
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