The shattered vista I cannot see,
of broken mirror'd crystal forms,
from shadows we must all break free,
to fight against the rising storms.
Author notes
Written December 7th, 2005
A contest entry
- Memorable Lines by Holly Ritz.
426 points, ended December 11, 2005, 13 entries
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Really well done! I really did enjoy this write of yours. Its a little on the scary side too, as you come to the realization that if you are going to win, you have to fight off the shadows, and its so easy just to let the shadows grow, and grow....again well done, and thanks for entering! GOod luck!
~~Holly -
AWESOMENESS times infinity and beyond. you really know what to say!!!! pretty awesome!!! I really liked the line "to fight against the rising storms" very moving. I love your poem you got here. keep up the good work and enter more contests i would love to see more of your work!!!!!!!! Love always, Marisa
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so true so true...I wish I could just let the shadows go that easily...great write, keep it up I can't wait to read more of your stuff
~~Love Notes and Razorblades~~ -
Ahhh. Very interesting. I liked the idea of breaking free from the shadows... Nice thought on that one. I bet a lot of people are going to use rhyme scheme on this short one. Good luck!
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