she lays six feet deep
under the snow
she is like a determined plague
of me
twisted women
twisted thoughts
she is like a riddle in your head
she is like my Vampyer tourniquet
sealed up with virgin stitches
Blood lust
I never wanted it this way
as I lay in a sober sleep
I see you in my dreams
lost in between reality
and this
blood red hair and crimson eyes
I see the depth of your soul
I want it too end
but I love it and I need it
dreaming a reality with you
i see your future I see you dreams
I see your mind
Like a rebel worm
six feet deep In bloody dreams
lust and desire
how could you ever believe in me
seething with bonded reality
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Written December 7th, 2005
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OOOO!I love this!!!! Hopeless, vampiristic romance...i love it...
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very dark......
-Soul -
Spectacular, I love it. I definetly enjoyed the deep, dark emotion of it. All in all, I think you did a wonderful job and I'll certainly keep my eyes open on your other poetry as well.
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I love the imagary in this poem. I also love just the whole idea for the poem. Wonderful. Keep on writing.
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awesome, you wrote a poem about my sister's AP dad
its still a kool poem though.
keep writing
from
Anastasia
who
loves
the
enter
key
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darkly beautiful
very nice. this is so full of emotion. i love this poem -
I became a girl? lol j/k Wassup? I like this very sweet.
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